Rebel
By: Destiny
I go to meet Alex in the evening just when the sun starts to set. I find that Hana is there too and they are both holding huge bags in their hands. As I see this, a smile shoots across my face and I feel as if this is all one fantasy. Before I can even finish the process of thinking, Hana grabs my arm, pulling me towards the way to the gate. The gate to freedom, where our mental thoughts aren't used against us. Its a place where love isn't something to be ashamed of. When I arrive there, I come to find my long lost mother who I've missed dearly.
"You guys keep going, I'm going back. I will come back later when it is safe"- Hana says reassuringly.
"What? NO! They will take you and harm you! Stop fooling around." I speak as I become angry at her statement.
"Baby, I promise it will all make since once you see what we have in mind," her mother says.
Before I could turn around to look back at Hana, she was gone. I was curious in what they meant. While in the process of what it could mean, Alex and my mother were grabbing my hands, pulling me along further into the woods of the wilds. Finally, they mention that were good now.
At the end of the sentence I blurt out impatiently "explain!"
So my mother began, "Hana is going back to become a part of the security and procedure operator.. She will pretend to give the procedure in which she will actually not. Her idea is to let people feel and think for themselves instead of what the government wants them too. This way, they will want to end the way the society is."
A load of people come out; I was astonished by what was happening. It was so much to process in such little time. Then my mother started again.
"And us, the invalids, we will prepare to put up a fight to distract the regulators and everyone else while the whole army of Hanas will take over and change the society."
Suddenly, all of the weight that was lifted off my shoulders once I came here was all put back on. This was something massive; never before has anyone done this. There has been schemes and raids, but nobody has went this far. I must get ready. We all must get ready for the fight of our lifes.
A few months later after all the training of being quiet and quick, Hana shows. We all gather up to head out to the labs. Once we are there, Hana lets us in. I watch the evaluations amused by how everyone is saying the same thing, the wrong thing to be exact. We then make a scene exposing each and every one of the invalids catching their attention. Hana goes and locks down the buildings and all of her followers who she has obtained are capturing the ones of the government and the ones who follow them. One by one, they are locked up. Funny, how its not so great when instead of it being us, it is them. How does it feel I think. Then I flash black to reality and realize I have no time to think, I must act. We began hacking and destroying all the monitors. Singing and speaking of things nobody has heard and then finally, its all said and done. Not only did we win, but we just made a new beginning to the society which nobody ever thought would have come.
At the end of the sentence I blurt out impatiently "explain!"
So my mother began, "Hana is going back to become a part of the security and procedure operator.. She will pretend to give the procedure in which she will actually not. Her idea is to let people feel and think for themselves instead of what the government wants them too. This way, they will want to end the way the society is."
A load of people come out; I was astonished by what was happening. It was so much to process in such little time. Then my mother started again.
"And us, the invalids, we will prepare to put up a fight to distract the regulators and everyone else while the whole army of Hanas will take over and change the society."
Suddenly, all of the weight that was lifted off my shoulders once I came here was all put back on. This was something massive; never before has anyone done this. There has been schemes and raids, but nobody has went this far. I must get ready. We all must get ready for the fight of our lifes.
A few months later after all the training of being quiet and quick, Hana shows. We all gather up to head out to the labs. Once we are there, Hana lets us in. I watch the evaluations amused by how everyone is saying the same thing, the wrong thing to be exact. We then make a scene exposing each and every one of the invalids catching their attention. Hana goes and locks down the buildings and all of her followers who she has obtained are capturing the ones of the government and the ones who follow them. One by one, they are locked up. Funny, how its not so great when instead of it being us, it is them. How does it feel I think. Then I flash black to reality and realize I have no time to think, I must act. We began hacking and destroying all the monitors. Singing and speaking of things nobody has heard and then finally, its all said and done. Not only did we win, but we just made a new beginning to the society which nobody ever thought would have come.
Overall, you have good content. I think that you definitely tried to put it in the correct POV to match the novel, and I appreciate that part. I think you did well on this one.
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